SquirrleyMojo:

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Saturday, February 04, 2006

Social Services

Right before I crossed the tracks,
railroad tracks that is,
I saw a woman
wrapped in an old quilt
clutching a cigrette
and dancing little hops in a circle under
a bare tree in front of a dirty, beatup house.

Her gobs of blonde hair were a mess,
it might have been drizzling,
I don't know how old or young she was,
but I had just been thinking about crack.

3 Comments:

At 8:16 AM, Blogger Happy and Blue 2 said...

Thinking about crack.
Did you pass a construction site before you got to her..

 
At 7:02 PM, Blogger MC Etcher said...

gobs of hair drizzling... you didn't quite say that, but I like it.

 
At 8:16 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

mc! you are so right!
what a dangling modifier--
shame on me.

SQ

 

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